tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post5388061617322656244..comments2024-01-28T03:56:39.351-08:00Comments on TOM CLARK: DaysUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-80387156827224780142009-06-30T22:21:19.190-07:002009-06-30T22:21:19.190-07:00Tom--the surface of the language is so simple--so ...Tom--the surface of the language is so simple--so quiet. The pace moves with sparrow-like calm. Thanks for this.Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13285558511682553411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-25473060775586287472009-06-30T19:46:51.962-07:002009-06-30T19:46:51.962-07:00Melissa--
and I couldn't wish for better comp...Melissa--<br /><br />and I couldn't wish for better company.TC/BTPnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-47046493308465063632009-06-30T09:14:17.479-07:002009-06-30T09:14:17.479-07:00lovely Tom-
and I continue to walk behind you/sin...lovely Tom-<br /><br />and I continue to walk behind you/single file/through this trickle of daysmelissa@orbisoftware.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05559864276420447318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-365676491932538772009-06-30T03:33:40.706-07:002009-06-30T03:33:40.706-07:00Thank you Mariana, I can play along to that tune a...Thank you Mariana, I can play along to that tune as long as I have a friend like you to sing it to me.TC/BTPnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-14475206717369888382009-06-30T02:29:36.064-07:002009-06-30T02:29:36.064-07:00My friend that is not cheating, consider it playin...My friend that is not cheating, consider it playing, and feel free to express yourself, there is not such thing as something that comes from nothing and take an art formMariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-6280222307126213282009-06-30T01:21:23.321-07:002009-06-30T01:21:23.321-07:00Owen, Billy,
Thank you, morning people. Always g...Owen, Billy,<br /><br />Thank you, morning people. Always good to be reminded the sun is not the only thing that rises.<br /><br /><br /><br />Mariana,<br /><br />Yes, I know what you mean about these lines:<br /><br />Sparrows are chirping<br />in the light evening rain.<br />Hearts full of fears,<br />they fly up and down.<br /><br />I'm afraid I cheated a bit and imported my own fears into the hearts of the innocent sparrows. Poetry is supposed to allow one to get away with that sort of thing. No wonder so many people distrust it!TC/BTPnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-48735609312456469702009-06-30T00:48:06.736-07:002009-06-30T00:48:06.736-07:00Very beautiful text tom.
I wonder why are they so ...Very beautiful text tom.<br />I wonder why are they so afraid, they are so so afraid they seem they are going to die, and indeed I think they do when they are too young. That is pretty sad. But your poem started haply appreciating nature and its facts, I like reading that paragraphs that transported me to a happy place in an unknown land.Mariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-63368130837316798372009-06-30T00:25:56.799-07:002009-06-30T00:25:56.799-07:00And mineAnd mineBillynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-30044091106883048712009-06-29T10:11:08.379-07:002009-06-29T10:11:08.379-07:00Thank you for this--made my morning.
OThank you for this--made my morning.<br /><br />Opoetowenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11278368064478791137noreply@blogger.com