tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post6811570234475495734..comments2024-01-28T03:56:39.351-08:00Comments on TOM CLARK: They dropped like Flakes -- They dropped like Stars --Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-87183854686977404702014-05-25T20:13:38.134-07:002014-05-25T20:13:38.134-07:00(And speaking of inversion of expectation, the ori...(And speaking of inversion of expectation, the originality and ingenuity of doing red, white and blue in black and white is pure Jim Rohan; making us all the more susceptible to that spectacularly fortuitous "capture" in the second photo here, in full coordinated colour, the guy bending over the sea of flags, dressed to blend...)TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915822857461178942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-38947606259144576562014-05-25T19:46:55.702-07:002014-05-25T19:46:55.702-07:00(Of course, it's the unanticipated dissonance ...(Of course, it's the unanticipated dissonance in the UNRHYMING final line that puts the original version over the top... the grass is seamless, the dead beneath it are numberless, and the chill fingers of the wind, almost touching the reader's wrist as they inscribe the list without repeal, are as final and palpable, in their way, as Melancholy's finger, pressed to her lips as she departs, in the Keats ode...)TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915822857461178942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-88080359988425177382014-05-25T19:37:22.908-07:002014-05-25T19:37:22.908-07:00Muchas gracias, amigos.
What is there to say abou...Muchas gracias, amigos.<br /><br />What is there to say about the talent here, but top flight?<br /><br />Jim Rohan, genius pure and simple. A poet "writing" with a camera.<br /><br />His neighbour Emily, not such a bad hand at poetry herself.<br /><br />This particular poem is not well known, but ought to be. It knocks me over every time I come back to it. Not that that's so difficult these days, but still.<br /><br />Like much of Dickinson's work, it went through squalls of sea-changing from composition to eventual publication.<br /><br />"Regularization" was the standard motive of editors.<br /><br />Neat and tidy rhyming was inserted, if not present in the original.<br /><br />Thus this poem ended up as follows: <br /><br />They dropped like flakes, they dropped like stars,<br /> Like petals from a rose,<br />When suddenly across the June<br /> A wind with finger goes.<br /><br />They perished in the seamless grass, --<br /> No eye could find the place;<br />But God on his repealless list<br /> Can summon every face.TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915822857461178942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-23937159700855289082014-05-25T17:59:20.072-07:002014-05-25T17:59:20.072-07:00A friend sent me this post, and it was so fine tha...A friend sent me this post, and it was so fine that i look forward to browsing your site this evening. Many thanks for reminding me of how very fine Dickinson was and for those superb photos.Matte Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01600390687462125499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-30706950364720608642014-05-24T09:32:56.321-07:002014-05-24T09:32:56.321-07:00Beautiful Memorial Day montage. Emily's list i...Beautiful Memorial Day montage. Emily's list is "repealless" -- what a strange and surprising word. And Pepsi versus Coke in the middle of all the flag waving. Hurrah. Mine eyes have seen the glory. -- DLLord Charliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00000494283344826691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-47359910823342835172014-05-24T08:24:18.515-07:002014-05-24T08:24:18.515-07:00Your posts are such a revelation. I never saw that...Your posts are such a revelation. I never saw that poem of Dickinson's before... I'm really swept away by it. It and your photos are the most serious, realistic, tragic and illumined memorial for Memorial Day I think any of us could find, or stomach! All blessings on thee...Daniel Abdal-Hayy Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05692776372807142753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-35979969066541990792014-05-24T08:20:47.472-07:002014-05-24T08:20:47.472-07:00repealless - list
What an acid sharp close! And t...repealless - list<br /><br />What an acid sharp close! And the hyphen to let the force of the word sink it.<br /><br />Comparing "seamless grass" to the sweatshop stitching on the flags.Mose23https://www.blogger.com/profile/01100756913131511440noreply@blogger.com