tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post8910537471340461733..comments2024-01-28T03:56:39.351-08:00Comments on TOM CLARK: D. H. Lawrence: Things Men Have MadeUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-24086670638755607542013-06-04T08:49:42.574-07:002013-06-04T08:49:42.574-07:00P. A. Pashibin says...in response to The Day Goes ...P. A. Pashibin says...in response to The Day Goes On Forever<br /><br /><br />Answer to Tom Clark<br /><br />The song is the door<br /><br />Birthing wail<br />Dying breath<br /><br />Same door<br />Open<br />Same door<br />Open<br /><br />Your poem<br />Sings the song<br /><br /> First song same as last song<br /><br />Waiting<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-40721058665284587162013-06-04T07:48:38.088-07:002013-06-04T07:48:38.088-07:00these last two poems remind me of a piece i just r...these last two poems remind me of a piece i just revisited for a dance performance last month:<br /><br />Everything in the Universe Ought to Be Mutual<br /><br />Who you see sees you.<br />Special relativity requires reciprocity;<br />our experiences experience us,<br />our dreams are dreaming...<br /><br />That which you do unto others<br />you have done to yourself:<br />when we curse we are cursed,<br />when we love we are loved,<br />when we lift we are lifted.<br /><br />We die when we kill.<br />We are born when we give birth.<br />We are known when we know:<br />We are they.<br /><br />The things we own own us,<br />the things we make make us;<br />if you get what you pay for<br />you will pay for what you get.<br /><br />No one is free while others are.<br />We are a tribe with no members,<br />and a member of no tribe: <br />a part of the world, apart. <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05674334016491214659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-23553245203343524852013-06-02T11:09:50.897-07:002013-06-02T11:09:50.897-07:00What does Lawrence see? Whatever it is, he’ll give...What does Lawrence <i>see</i>? Whatever it is, he’ll give it much more than just a cursory glance--you can tell by that piercing look.vazambam (Vassilis Zambaras)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14515165428574974933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-40471020600519179482013-06-02T09:33:56.765-07:002013-06-02T09:33:56.765-07:00Tom,
"Things . . . made with hands" v. ...Tom,<br /><br />"Things . . . made with hands" v. "Things made by iron and handled with steel" -- that little child's horse v. that iron horse moving through abandoned frozen world of Sengyang -- Lawrence still there, looking.<br /><br /><br />6.2<br /><br />light coming into sky above black plane<br />of ridge, waning white moon by branches<br />in foreground, wave sounding in channel<br /><br /> in the midst of which as if<br /> experienced, thinking<br /><br /> of it, light coming through<br /> fog, improbable in it<br /><br />blinding silver sun above top of ridge,<br />cormorant flapping across toward point<br />STEPHEN RATCLIFFEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12339481653546188412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-1410722138712335572013-06-02T08:30:09.692-07:002013-06-02T08:30:09.692-07:00WOWOW ! 860 of his poems... uncensored !!!
whose ...WOWOW ! 860 of his poems... uncensored !!!<br /><br />whose going to protect our children?<br />our adults who won't be able to handle this (coming)<br />"stuff ? this will lead us into hard drugs into murder, mayhem and rape !<br /><br />Quick, lock up your sons and daughters and the rest of the Flock. Quickly: strike up The Band ... here comes the parade ;<br /><br />what political/religious group will step-up to the plate and save us from [ourselves] ?<br /><br />Ed Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11285310130024785775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-45942148175425847872013-06-02T08:14:36.629-07:002013-06-02T08:14:36.629-07:00Lawrence looking...
What does he see?<a href="http://www.mhpbooks.com/dh-lawrences-poetry-to-be-published-uncensored-for-the-first-time/d-h-lawrence-2-2/" rel="nofollow">Lawrence looking...</a><br /><br />What does he see?TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915822857461178942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-7576844365415835582013-06-02T07:58:13.543-07:002013-06-02T07:58:13.543-07:00Wakened hands - the opposite of waged/indentured h...Wakened hands - the opposite of waged/indentured hands. <br /><br />Lawrence's eyes have also struck me as being awake as few others are in every photo I've seen of him.<br /><br />The horse is looking pretty good for nigh on 3000 years old. Mose23https://www.blogger.com/profile/01100756913131511440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-63970782414055008872013-06-02T04:49:13.279-07:002013-06-02T04:49:13.279-07:00Sweet Peas / arranged / in a vase
placed on the wi...Sweet Peas / arranged / in a vase<br />placed on the window sill ...<br /><br />opens up (to imagination) a life-time<br />in images....<br /><br />no wonder that there is Magic in writing<br />what is ... at hand and in the doing ?<br /><br />"sweetheart of his youth" <br />an unrequited love<br />- no doubt -<br />........................captured<br /><br />jeesh... I'm going to play with this<br />and the other 10,000 images now<br />coming and going through my mind<br /><br />start another run at "it" see what<br />pops up and flowers <br />among my weeds<br /><br />think I'll read Sons and Lovers.... have yet to so do.<br /><br /><br />Ed Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11285310130024785775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4445844569294316288.post-21626442818482819802013-06-02T03:38:14.706-07:002013-06-02T03:38:14.706-07:00Lawrence had a great knack for making and repairin...Lawrence had a great knack for making and repairing things with his hands.<br /><br />He mended blankets and shawls, built furniture, planted gardens, baked bread, addressing these small jobs with skill and gusto.<br /><br />The sweetheart of his youth, Jessie Chambers (Miriam in Sons and Lovers), recalled:<br /><br />"No task seemed dull or monotonous to him. He brought such vitality to the doing that he transformed it into something creative. He was proud of his small hands, extremely clever hands they were, equally deft at arranging sweet peas in a vase or at sowing the seed."TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915822857461178942noreply@blogger.com