Wednesday, 19 September 2012

Girl with Racket


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Girl with Racket and Shuttlecock
: Jean-Baptiste-Siméon Chardin, c. 1740, oil on canvas, 82 x 66 cm (Galleria degli Uffizi, Florence)

 


You might fill empty futures with your raging
Power.  Everything is possible.
The story has not yet begun yet promises
Much.  Having glimpsed the magic ring
On the captive's finger, the bright-eyed heroine
Might turn out to be you, making your way
Up mountains of difficulty to shining
Temples in which is kept alive that flame
Of truth which burns at the heart of the ark
Of the covenant of being you.
You might, in the forest, hear that falling tree.
You're young, you want to be free, but aren't yet.
You might walk the cow, ride the rocket ship.
You might book the flight, then jump out of the plane.
You might meet a boy named X.  He might say
You don't know me, nor do I know you.



16 comments:

  1. They gave me an impossible task
    play with the racket
    they said.
    Even though my hair was grey
    I was young at heart
    bouncing around
    the little town
    in my tennis shoes
    avoiding the spiders
    grinding dust.

    The courts lit at night
    under the stars
    when things cooled down
    it didn't seem
    as if any time passed
    there hitting the ball
    back and forth.

    I can't say I got better
    only more open
    to the passing shots
    some I hit
    many were missed.
    Oohs and ahhs
    deep inside me.

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  2. The "walk the cow" part, so familiar. Nice, about the ring. The forest attracts the most. Jumping into the arms of X. Been there, done that. They crossed at the last moment, like his name, gets me to thinking about that flame.

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  3. The Girl With The Racket Tattoo

    Knew what to do.
    On her mind, murder
    Calculations of the riot
    Later.

    She kept this all
    Under her hat
    Her little cap.

    A racket
    Just about as good
    As a pearl earring
    Although not
    As small.

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  4. Tom,

    How still she is, holding that raquet, looking ahead (or inward?) toward what might be.

    9.19

    light coming into fog against invisible
    top of ridge, bird slanting to the left
    in foreground, sound of wave in channel

    each next thing, which does
    not ‘flow’ or ‘change’

    object next to silent, more
    so, how to hear sound

    silver of sunlight reflected in channel,
    fog on horizon to the left of the point

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  5. When I saw the shuttlecock, Nancy from Ford Madox Ford's "The Good Soldier" came into my head:

    "Yes, society must go on; it must breed, like rabbits. That is what we are here for. But then, I don't like society--much. I am that absurd figure, an American millionaire, who has bought one of the ancient haunts of English peace. I sit here, in Edward's gun-room, all day and all day in a house that is absolutely quiet. No one visits me, for I visit no one. No one is interested in me, for I have no interests. In twenty minutes or so I shall walk down to the village, beneath my own oaks, alongside my own clumps of gorse, to get the American mail. My tenants, the village boys and the tradesmen will touch their hats to me. So life peters out. I shall return to dine and Nancy will sit opposite
    me with the old nurse standing behind her. Enigmatic, silent, utterly well-behaved as far as her knife and fork go, Nancy will stare in front of her with the blue eyes that have over them strained, stretched brows. Once, or perhaps twice, during the meal her knife and fork will be suspended in mid-air as if she were trying to think of something that she had forgotten. Then she will say that she believes in an Omnipotent Deity or she will utter the one word "shuttle-cocks", perhaps. It is
    very extraordinary to see the perfect flush of health on her cheeks, to see the lustre of her coiled black hair, the poise of the head upon the neck, the grace of the white hands--and to think that it all means nothing--that it is a picture without a meaning. Yes, it is queer. "

    The girl in the Chardin picture stands in that moment, racket in hand, where Everything is Possible is the writing in the mind. Nothing is yet played out, promises yet to go rotten.

    The poem is full of boy and girl energy. The ghost of Jonson's boy may be somewhere here.

    P.S. Is it a key or are those scissors hanging from the blue ribbon?

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  6. I stared into the flame.
    It was a living fire.
    I liked the warmth
    withstood
    snowy parts
    Of a hellish season.
    Flowers and all
    The work
    Had to be a challenge.
    I called to him
    To that boy
    His exuberance
    Flickered.

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  7. Thanks for the link to the Daniel Johnston track, TC. Beautiful. I was wondering where the phrase "walking the cow" came from.

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  8. Tom

    "that flame / Of truth which burns at the heart of the ark / Of the covenant of being you."

    This line, there is a lump in my throat ... very fine.

    thanks,
    Don

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  9. As to the appurtenances and accessories of the young lady's costume, we have been lost for some hours in a sea of closed robes, hoop petticoats, false rumps and long aprons.

    The fashion marvels of the epoch encompass several mysteries.

    From the Universal Spectator, five years after Chardin made his painting, we learn that the French styles had already crossed the water.

    "The enormous abomination of the Hoop Petticoat... a girl of seventeen taking up the whole side of a street with her hollow standing petticoat", & c.

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  10. Don,

    Those lines, and in fact the whole drift and gist of what's happening here, came out of several decades of exposure, once upon a time, long ago, to the Planet of The Young...

    (My Mr. Chips Experience.)

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  11. Hello, Mr. Chips
    You save my life
    Day after day
    When all is said
    done
    My mind
    My life
    Soap opera
    dissolves
    During the night
    Remember the fallen
    List their names
    Deeds ideas
    To make them real
    An antidote
    magical comb
    golden horse
    maps
    their well-creased
    folds fantastic
    depictions
    despite rubble
    many treasures
    Seemingly buried
    Seemingly forgotten
    come to life light
    breeze

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  12. Tom Clark, you know all the cool stuff.

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  13. Thanks, Tom.

    BTW, you might do all of these things so poignantly set down in your poem or you might not, but reading this poem--now that does count for a lot.

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