Beyond the Pale
Beautiful pictures, all three ... Buson, such a painterly poet.Don
I love the delicacy of Blyth's version, Don, the way the consonants slow things down and give the poem that long-legged-bird-walking feeling, everything keying in on the verb "played".(Sure, they're pecking-about to dig up this or that bug or grub, which is certainly practical enough, but beyond that, the poet recognizes that they seem at the same time to be making the work of food-getting disappear into the natural pleasure of it.)
The delicacy of Blyth's version perfectly captures it ... As you describe, really photo-like. Sketching the naturalness of the movement and the essence of plover. To feel that movement in words is itself indescribable. Thanks, Tom
Tom,Yes, beautiful -- thanks for this and the days before it too. . . . Those birds ("lesser" only in name) and words (the pl in "plovers" replayed in "Played," et in "Wetting" in "feet") - - - -1.24pale orange of sky above black branchesof trees, whiteness of moon by branchesin foreground, sound of wave in channel white of cloud in pale blue sky, branch in shadow below it, sparrow on feeder, wing passing overheadgrey-white clouds reflected in channel,shadowed green pine on tip of sandspit
This series (all of it) reminds me of the things I don't notice. One thing I often fail to notice is the need poetry serves to restore me and bring me back from various edges I approach all the time in daily life. The last couple of days became unexpectedly (I'm happy about this) professionally busy, which meant lots of edges, tension, confusion and counterfeiting calm. All of these bring me back to the real thing. I love the Blyth versions also and was fascinated to learn about his life.
Tom,yes, good to see this again, "that long-legged-bird-walking feeling" . . . .1.25first light in sky above still shadowed ridge, song sparrow calling from branchin foreground, wave sounding in channel perhaps “separate” painting, view made in relation thinking, to move in shadow of which, that itselfsilver line of sun reflected in channel,white moon in pale blue sky above point
Tom,Hello again, Lesser Sand Plovers, one can keep coming back to this one. "Sketching . . . the movement" as Don says, "the essence of plover." Bob and I were looking at Blyth's Haiku last night and came upon "separateness of things, the mind swings back to the other extreme," maybe something like how the poem can bring Curtis "back from various edges. . . ."1.26orange edge of sun below still shadowedplane of trees, red-tailed hawk callingin foreground, wave sounding in channel being itself in order to be elsewhere, the object structure, individual parts, regarded in isolationcloudless blue sky reflected in channel,waning moon in pale blue sky on horizon
How are you, Tom? It's been a while with no news from you.Best wishes!J
Yes, we're hoping Tom is well and will address us soon.
Hello all and it's lovely to see the ripples in the pond of the great work of Reginald Horace BlythSorry to have been "away" four days. Computer crashed and burned, perhaps a mercy because there was little happy to share in one's own sorry mortal state bone abcess, sulfa drug & c. Greater and greater envy of the graceful long-lagged water-walking birds. What's their secret?being itself in order to beelsewhere, the objectstructure, individual parts,regarded in isolation
You were missed, Tom ...May we all emulate those long-legged birds -
Thank you, Don, there are moments when a kind word means a lot. In gratitude, dedicated to you, on this ancient rainy, windy morning: Buson: Winter Rain.
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